World building. The first episode

#1

My brothers on the shield wall get the first look…

Tell me what you think?

#2

I like it. I love how you use the mini to make it a conversation instead of ‘I’m going to explain everything’. It gives a good dynamic on the video.

I also like how you take your time to talk and explain. It makes me able to focus on what you are saying and not drift away like I often have in (for example) Matt Colville’s video’s. I think the pacing of the video is good. I’m curious to see what the series will go towards.

#3

Kick ass!!!
Better than before, audio is still a bit off. I hear static listening on my iPhone until 50% volume. I honestly forgot the setting that sets that but I believe you have your microphone set too high. Others with more current audio experience can let you know.

I believe you can make it a bit tighter, your minion got out of character by being unsure of himself. Um, while I love in my day to day, should not come from an authority unless there is some level of sarcasm involved.
Oddly I also think you can expound more on the different approaches and why you prefer spiral method.
Perhaps explain a mixed top down, spiral method, where you create the gods, races, archetypes, but then focus on a city and let nuance in… all that said I have yet to post one video so you are miles ahead of me…I need to buy a mic and just make something using my phone.
I’m just going to say, improve audio.

#4

I like it and agreed, adding the token as a talking part is original. My suggestion would be additional talking points under your titles on the pop ups. Top-down — > big picture, a lot of work, grander scale (for example). But as a moving forward suggestion; not a now thing. I think this is good as is!

#5

Thanks for the feed back, it’s much appreciated. I’ll try to figure out what the problem with my audio is.

#6

Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it. :metal: