nice one, pretty inspiring.
But for my taste, the space on each page isn’t used well. Maybe this could be like 3-column landscape (bullets top, map and art below), kind of a single-page adventure.
But those are just my two cents, rock on. I like reading more of those!
/EDIT: The badge from the Content Creation Regulations could be useful too (for the sake of using a single badge across all ICRPG fan-made things)
Respect Hank’s copyright and do not incorporate any of his content into a derivative work without his permission. This statement goes double for art.