Awesome Hack, I look forward to seeing it in play. Breaking spells out in to having int be the number of spells but wis be the power for the spells is something I haven’t seen before. I see a lot of 5td influence and a icrpg grade distillation of what made that system interesting with the supply and having each stat account for a significant ability of the character.
the description on pg 4 and the included character sheet have conflicting accounts of what wis and int do for power / number of words
Have a glossary of the terms used. I saw the term FREEFORM rest in the dying section and didn’t see it mentioned anywhere else, I assume that is just when players are sitting around doing whatever out of combat but clarifying doesn’t hurt
the +effort system is a bit confusing if the actions are providing a flat bonus per fiction element or if its going up the d4 d6 d8 d10 d12 chain as a bonus to the base effort used in the fiction
Include a sample character and a snippet of how actual play would go between a player and the gm.
have some example tables for the new additions like legacies to inspire while reading