Interesting system, not too sure how familiar you are with ICRPG at the moment.
I’m going to give an honest review of the package as a whole after reading through it once, not using it or anything beyond that initial browse to take it for the 0.00002 cents it is worth.
Keep in mind ICRPG already has an AI system that GMs are encouraged to create for their creatures…
reverse page setup and differing page sizes is gimmicky for no reason. if I am cutting these up…leave them in the same orientation and size, If I where making an A frame the reversal would make sense.
Intro and instructions fit on one page, I really find the reversing page to stick to the gimmick annoying especially for reading rules…I have to cut this up to read it in a normal fashion? order of pages is 2,3,4,5 on one side and 6,7,8,1 on the other on rule zine 1, then on rule zine 2 it is the same. I am still confused as to the logic.
4+ fonts being used and legibility of some is questionable. I would recommend less is more in this case.
many concepts are on more than one mini-page. they would all fit on 2 8.5x11 or A4 page. the gimmick is detracting from the product.
I like the NPC sheets, but they don’t have space for injury tracking or Ticking down one use abilities or to the next AI change.
Orcs and Goblins pg 8 should just be on the character sheet.
Seems decent enough, but not compatible with all systems, that is very D20 of you.
Most of it is good. but in the case of the thief for example…it just steals 3d6 of gold from a PC…no check? Affecting the PCs with no roll of the dice is kind of interesting.
Also on that page…what is this Disadvantage you speak of???be careful applying a certain rule set and calling your system compatible or generic. ICRPG and most other RPGs does not use Advantage/disadvantage and there are people who never played D&D 5E, that role-play a lot.
You have the beginning of an interesting product here, more polish and design is required, ICRPG is a great place to start, Rune Hammers videos are a great place to get inspiration. I really like the layout of the NPC sheets, but they require a bit of tweaking to be useful at a table. Keep at it.
as @KaneDriscol shows there is the NPC page layout and concept is good…just come tweaking
You have a more finished RPG product than I ever made, so don’t take anything I said to heart, they are just quick over the top observations.