Didn’t see anywhere to report this so thought I’d do it here. I haven’t had a chance to read through completely, but figured I’d get these reported.
pg. 9 - “The GM will hurl all manner of monster at you.”
Could be correct or it might be “monsters” was intended?
pg. 12 - “There and many foes of both sides in the wide world…”
Should probably be “There are many…”
pg. 18 - “Simple restoration occurs by the rules on page 12.”
Not on pg.12, should be 16 I believe.
pg. 20 - “These can spent to add skills, spells,”
“These can be spent…”
pg. 31 - “There will plenty of time in play”
“There will be plenty…”
pg. 31 - “There are five lineages to choose from,.”
unneeded comma
p. 32 - “You invent your own boogie men, and sew doubt among others.”
Should be “sow doubt”